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There were all lies...

Every moment that we had together, It was all one big lie.
We never actually cared for each other as much as I thought we did,
We didn't actually miss each other when one was away for more then a day,
He never genuinely wanted to cheer me up when I was sad.


The worst part is when it all came together, when It just started making sence, The moment it hit me, It felt like I was hit by a truck, a truck that had big flashing red and green lights that spelled out "I'm going to hit you"

He never meant it when he said he loved me.
He never meant it when he reassured me.

He never felt the same way I felt when we had our first date.
He never felt the same way I felt when our hands had accidentally touched.
He never felt the same way I felt when we kissed.


It was all
just lies.


Just a lie.
©2008 ~Otavia-chan
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Inspired be one word. Lies.

Lol, I just saw the word "Lies" somewhere and Immediately I was in a depressed mood, and a few seconds after, I had opened up a notepad window and started typing.
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*fairy-of-illusions:iconfairy-of-illusions: Apr 25, 2008, 7:31:25 AM Mood: Sadness
That's so sad... Beautiful, still sad..

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~aiemcross:iconaiemcross: Apr 25, 2008, 10:03:59 AM
awws, it is so sad :( its ok, come sry on my shoulder *pats on head*

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~PimpCookie:iconPimpCookie: Apr 25, 2008, 4:29:32 PM
This is so sad and well written. It really speaks to me and sadly reminds me of one of my friends relationships... *sigh* Well done with this.
~juliemci:iconjuliemci: Apr 27, 2008, 5:43:26 PM
I wrote lies, im glad that it inspired you, but sad that it depressed you
~drbrendin:icondrbrendin: Apr 27, 2008, 5:46:48 PM
this is relly good

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~Otavia-chan:iconOtavia-chan: Apr 27, 2008, 10:54:57 PM
Thanks ^^

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~Otavia-chan:iconOtavia-chan: Apr 27, 2008, 10:55:07 PM
Thankz cat<3

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~Otavia-chan:iconOtavia-chan: Apr 27, 2008, 10:55:45 PM
thanks for the comment, but sorry that it reminded you ;-;

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~Otavia-chan:iconOtavia-chan: Apr 27, 2008, 10:56:19 PM
yeah, you did lol x3 and I like your "Lies..." better ;3

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